The Nessie Milestone Class11

Main Assignment- Children’s book
The Loch Ness Monster
Milestone Class 11

Nessie Final Design

The new Nessie design combined with the dinosaur head and Nessie’s body. Note that when Nessie just born its head is not bumped, it bumped up when Nessie grows up.

 Nessie’s egg as the toy merchandise.

Main Character Design, Nell

Nell’s design, a boy, child and youth version. He is from Scotland wearing a kilt.

Other Character Design

Nell’s friends. From all around the world.

Two 2 page spread, fixed version

 Page1

Page2

Last week I was been told this is a lack of variation in compositions, so I changed it to triangular and linear composition, also the Nessie size changed as it's growing up.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!